Verbs
[1] This disease is known as …
[2] Head and neck cancers are caused by …
[3] Previous studies have shown …
[4] We will discuss in this paper …
[5] The project focuses on …
[6] Lacking of* physical findings and symptoms …
ü Lacking in physical findings and symptoms …
[7] We believe we could get further results related* latter in our follow up work.
ü We believe we could obtain further results related to our follow up work later.
[8] To analyse the gene-expression of cancer patients …
[9] … we constructed the cluster using the data selected through variance analysis.
[10] … we defined the distance between two clusters …
[11] The study of Yeung and Ruzzo (2001) showed …
[12] … the variance of each gene among all patients was calculated and the genes with a high variance were selected and used for further analysis.
[13] … we have adopted hierarchical cluster, and k means methods …
[14] PCA method was applied to the data …
[15] Step 1: Investigating* meaningful genes to analyse
ü Investigate meaning genes to analyse
Step 2: Construct a matrix for Cluster Analysis
Step 3: Analyse Heatmap for deeper understanding
Step 4: Conclusion*
ü Conclude the study and findings
ü Or, use the gerund (VERB + ‒ing) throughout the steps.
[16] This project focus* …
ü This project focuses ...
[17] Figure 1 plots the variance of 5495 genes …
[18] … figure 2 shows the density of these variances.
[19] Table/Figure N indicates …
[20] We carried out a principal component analysis to investigate whether we could capture most of the variation …
[21] … the first 5 components could capture 50% of the variance.
[22] We eliminated the first two columns of the data …
[23] To calculate …
[24] … we defined our own function …
[25] Another way of deciding how many components to retain …
[26] … the dimension can be reduced to …
Corresponding nouns for describing trends: increase, decrease, peak, trough/bottom, fluctuation, stabilization
[27] Because these two components could only account for 34% of the variance which does not provide a satisfactory result, …
[28] The difference between groups may have resulted from different cancer stages …
[29] We found/consider …
[30] To sum* the result …
ü To sum up the result …
[31] … we were limited by the small sample size of patients …
[32] By analysing gene-expression … we can identify which gene can affect the occurrence ratio of Head and neck cancer.
[33] … hypothesis testing could be established to …
[34] We ignored/did not consider …
[35] We expected …
Adjectives and adverbs
[36] The box plot shows that number of births on weekdays were higher than on weekends.
[37] The most significant trend seen in the box plot is that most births took place during weekdays, with the highest mean on Tuesdays.
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